bsg ficlet: eeeeeeep!

[rose_griffes]

This was going to be the ending to a third (and final) on-earth fanfic. But this ending gave me the creeps. Eeep! So I'm putting it here as a ficlet, and hope my brain (and muse) can move on to some other idea...



Kara's hand was cold in his. She still looked nervous, so he gave her hand a small squeeze and smiled at her. She pulled her hand away. Across the room walking toward them was the tall man he had seen her with before, accompanied by the dark-haired girl. Kara rushed forward and hugged the man, then turned and said, "Leoben, this is Karl Agathon." They shook hands and Kara continued. "This is his daughter Hera."

Hera shook his hand gravely. "You weren't always real," she said, "but I think you're real now." She turned to Kara and her eyes lit up. "He'll bit a little like me!" she gasped excitedly. Then she put her head to Kara's still-flat stomach, smiling. Kara was pale as she stared at the small dark head leaning against her belly. Hera stood back abruptly and looked up at Kara. "Don't worry. You'll like him."

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[bbeatnu.livejournal.com]

You could always go with, Sam and Kara separated but he's come around hoping for a reconciliation but hears from helo or hotdog (any of the guys) about seeing Leoben. He confronts Kara at her apartment and finds she's not alone. "You're FRAKKING him!" Kara failed to mention she was married. "Wait you're married!" You never addressed Leoben finding out he's a sleeper cylon. "You're frakking a toaster, Kara." Irony that Sam is a secretly one of the final five. Freakout ensues, "This is crazy. I'm human."

I'd say there is a lot there.