[identity profile] rose-griffes.livejournal.com 2011-10-31 09:45 pm (UTC)(link)
*sigh* I wish I could decide what was best for the fic I'm writing now. I keep wavering!
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[identity profile] lyssie.livejournal.com 2011-11-03 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
Try reading it out loud? Sometimes, that seems to help (well, and also, sometimes, it keeps trying to be one thing while you insist it SHOULD BE ANOTHER )

[identity profile] rose-griffes.livejournal.com 2011-11-03 10:58 pm (UTC)(link)
I think it's the latter. But good point about reading it aloud--haven't done it yet with this story.