another writing (and reading) poll

[rose_griffes]

[Poll #1791045]

Comments

[lyssie.livejournal.com]

Try reading it out loud? Sometimes, that seems to help (well, and also, sometimes, it keeps trying to be one thing while you insist it SHOULD BE ANOTHER )

[rose-griffes.livejournal.com]

I think it's the latter. But good point about reading it aloud--haven't done it yet with this story.